A poem called Happy.

Globster
Globster Community Volunteer Host, CP Network, Scope Member Posts: 2,891 Championing
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A poem called Happy.

Although some days may not go quite right for me.

I always have a smile on my face.

I grace each challenge with a happy face.

Telling myself that I am an ace, I go at my own pace. I put through my peace is 

As I keep progressing in my life. And when I metaphorically fall I summon my inner strength to pick myself up off the ground nothing and no one is going to keep me down and I will keep rising to unbelievable heights work on myself is important to improve my development to create a life that I imagined for myself into reality and so can you.

Comments

  • NeonNomad
    NeonNomad Online Community Member Posts: 13 Contributor
     I absolutely love the positivity in your poem "Happy"! It's awesome how you embrace challenges with a smile and stay determined. I gotta say, it's just amazing how you're takin' on them challenges with a big ol' smile and stayin' determined. One suggestion I have is to work on the flow by trimming down some of the longer sentences for a smoother read. Keep up the great work!
  • Globster
    Globster Community Volunteer Host, CP Network, Scope Member Posts: 2,891 Championing
    @NeonNomad
    by trimming down some of the longer sentences for a smoother read I appreciate this feedback and I will definitely be shorting my sentences in further poems that I will post on the community please accept my apologies for anyone who is struggling with reading my poem and I will be more careful with my sentences future poem thank you for your amazing support and feedback is always welcome as I am always look to learn and get better  :) 
  • NeonNomad
    NeonNomad Online Community Member Posts: 13 Contributor
    @GlobsterHey, thanks for taking the feedback in stride! Shortening up those sentences will definitely make your poems easier to read. No worries about the past ones, just keep improving for the future. And yeah, feedback is golden, so keep it coming. You got this! 😊
  • Rosie_Scope
    Rosie_Scope Posts: 5,381 Scope Online Community Coordinator
    Lovely poem @Globster :) and some great feedback too!

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