Poem called heart skips beat

Globster
Globster Community Volunteer Host, CP Network, Scope Member Posts: 2,744 Championing
edited June 2023 in Coffee lounge
Poem called heart skips beat
My heart skipped a beat when I saw my true love for the first time. 
My heart pines for you my sweet boo that you. 
I shower you with gifts with express how you mean to me but I love seeing your smile every morning and kissing your sweet beautiful lips which allows us to express our love for each other I feel like we ameant for each other. My heart is so much meant for you my gorgeous princess. I yurn to share y feelings with you through my poetry writing which has finally filled the gapping black void in both our hearts you are like the big umbrella that protects our hearts that our love story began as we keep running through each other’s minds that defines our love for each other you have been the support and rock in both our lives and watch our love story is so special and meaningful love for you as look into each other’s star like eyes.our eyes intertwined with our love for one another. I hope that we will let our love develop into something special I love you so much and I love you so much I cherish you so deeplly you are so radiant in whatever you wear my love for each other will be like a blossoming like a flower you tower with grace and praise that your radiant smile our beautiful sense of accomplishment I love you so extremely very much I love you so much the young woman that means that I love you so much 

Comments

  • Alex_Alumni
    Alex_Alumni Scope alumni Posts: 7,538 Championing
    Lots of good metaphors in this poem @Globster, voids, umbrellas, rocks and stars, it's all going on!
  • Globster
    Globster Community Volunteer Host, CP Network, Scope Member Posts: 2,744 Championing
    @Alex_Scope I appreciate you seeing so many metaphors did you like the range of words I used in this poem  :)
  • Globster
    Globster Community Volunteer Host, CP Network, Scope Member Posts: 2,744 Championing
    @Beaver79 thank you for saying that my range of words were amazing it’s really appreciated thank you so much  :)