Staying positive

loony
loony Community Member Posts: 42 Empowering
in Everyday life

I hope many of you will be uplifted by my poem

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  • Bluebell21
    Bluebell21 Community Member Posts: 4,491 Championing

    Hi @loony great poem.

    Thank you for sharing.

  • luvpink
    luvpink Community Member Posts: 5,127 Championing

    @loony

    Lovely positive and kind poem.

    Thank you for sharing it with us.

  • Rachel_Scope
    Rachel_Scope Posts: 4,146 Online Community Team

    That's lovely, thank you @loony.

  • WelshBlue
    WelshBlue Community Member Posts: 1,419 Championing

    @loony … beautiful and profound poem. Very emotive

    I like to write lyrics and add music about my life and it's tribulations, and yours really struck a chord.

    I hope you don't mind but I added your words to music. Any objections, just let me know here and I'll take it down immediately no problem. From here and YouTube ( My videos aren't monetised)

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=od0yMC5Tk6E
  • figraspberry41
    figraspberry41 Scope Member Posts: 182 Empowering

    @Loony (and @WelshBlue), thank you for sharing your poem Loony and thank you for the music. I'm sure that there are many of us who can resonate with the poem and nicely put to music.

  • loony
    loony Community Member Posts: 42 Empowering

    Welsh Blue I’m not sure how to tag you but it’s nice to have music but can you please acknowledge that it is mostly my words, thanks

  • Mary_Scope
    Mary_Scope Posts: 5,096 Scope Online Community Children and Family Specialists

    Beautiful @loony, thank you for sharing

  • loony
    loony Community Member Posts: 42 Empowering

    @WelshBlue thanks for putting music to my words, is there a chance you could acknowledge that there mostly my words, thanks, just worked out how to tag people

  • WelshBlue
    WelshBlue Community Member Posts: 1,419 Championing

    @loony apologies, I've been away from the computer for a couple of days and didn't get around to editing the video. All done now and people I've let listen love the power of the words

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3KEEBy5oufw
  • loony
    loony Community Member Posts: 42 Empowering

    thanks @WelshBlue

  • Holly_Scope
    Holly_Scope Posts: 6,239 Online Community Team

    I knew as soon as I saw this title i was going to love this poem! I really related to it, thank you for sharing @loony 😊

  • loony
    loony Community Member Posts: 42 Empowering

    @WelshBlue I think out of all my poems this one’s prob better as lyrics as the others mostly rhyme

  • loony
    loony Community Member Posts: 42 Empowering

    @WelshBlue I’ve just noticed one of the words is wrong ion the edited version could u change it please? Instead of depth you have put death and that’s wrong. Please try and amend it it’s great otherwise

  • WelshBlue
    WelshBlue Community Member Posts: 1,419 Championing

    @loony … will do. Apologies about that 😉

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