Three poem for a locol poetry competion

Globster

Hello Scope online community 

I would to hear what the scope of online think about my poems I going entering into a local poetry competition 

Poem called friends no longer with us

1. I miss those friends who are no longer with us.

2. I shed a tear every time I think about the friends who I have lost.

3. I will never forget the memories I made with friends I lost.

4. I know you have all now become sparkling stars in the night sky.

5. You will be looking down from heaven at the glorious things I am doing now.

6. I am pursuing my dreams that never seem the same without my friends lost.

7. I am going to use their loss in a positive way.

8. I say to those friends I have lost that they live in a special place in my heart.

9. I use my art of poetry writing to get through these difficult times.

10.  Time is a fantastic healer.

11. There are some days I cry for the friends I have lost.

12. I know by crying I help my friends' souls to rest in peace.

13. I know that the loss of my friends can never ease.

14. The friends in heaven are my guardian angels looking over me.

15.  I now feel free I agree that friends would want me to move on with my life.

16. I felt inner conflict when I lost my friends.

17. I express emotions about losing my friends by using my poetry,

18. which is stopping me from being depressed by losing my friends.

19. The pen ink is still wet on the paper I wrote poetry on.

20. I hope I have shone a positive light on losing my friends. 

Poem called friends

1. A young man called Jay.

2. He became fantastic friends with a young woman called Kay.

3. Kay and Jay lift each other when one of them is feeling down.

4. Kay and Jay listened and helped each other through life’s difficulties. 

5. Jay and Kay's friendship grows stronger with each day.

6. Jay and Kay loved to spend time with each other. 

7. They knew how to laugh for half an hour each day.

8. Even those people who tried to break up Jay and Kay as friends failed.

9. But nothing seemed to get in the way of Jay and Kay being friends.

10. Jay and Kay turned their friendship into a storybook,

11. which showed the importance of having friends.

12. Jay and Kay were there for each other day or night.

13. The light of friendship burned bright in both Jay and Kay's hearts 

14. Jay and Kay never let anything get in the way of their friendship.

15. They used the strength they gained through being friends positively.

16. This gave them both the strength to follow and achieve their dreams.

17. Kay and Jay were part of each other’s success.

18. They were best friends as they progressed to glorious things in both lives.

19. Jay and Kay’s friendship was like a precious gem.

20. Jay and Kay extend a hand of friendship to each other as they are friends and have been long and are still friends to this day.

Poem called Strangers 

1. A young woman whose name was Katie.

2. It was quarter past eight on Friday evening when she was sitting at the bar, enjoying a quiet drink on her own after a busy week at work.

3. A handsome young man glanced at Kate from across the bar.

4. The young man called Simon came over and offered to buy her a drink. 

5. Katie and Simon got to talking, and they found that both were interested in going on nature walks around different parts of the beautiful countryside.

6. It was getting late, so he walked her to her home.

7. They left the pub together and made the short walk to their street.  

8. She did not realise that Simon was her next-door neighbour.  

9. She kissed him on his cheek and thanked Simon for a glorious evening. 

10. They exchanged mobile numbers 

11.      They had a pleasant walk on the beautiful Yorkshire Moors. 

12. Kate did Simon's glorious walk as they saw beautiful likes birds and squirrels and butterflies with colourful wings of blue, purple, white and blue could be seen.  

13.  They went for a stunning pub lunch together before, he took the tab.

14.  could be seen and glorious smelling flowers along their walk.    

15. They went for a stunning pub lunch together before, he took the tab.

16.    This was before Simon made the drive back from Yorkshire to their homes.

17. When they arrived home Katie thanked Simon for a pleasant day.

18. She invited Simon for a cup of tea and a piece of strawberry homemade cake.

19. The two of them shared fantastic laughter together.

20.  Kate and Simon “I can't believe we started as strangers”

21. Kate says bye to Simon who thanks her for the tea and cake.   

22. Simion and Katie were true friends who were always there for each other.

Ross_Alumni

Three brilliant entries there @Globster, all the best for the competition  

Globster

@Ross_Scope
I have relised I have missed out  line 13 in the stranger poem please find the missing line 13 out 
I appreciate it if please edit the discussion and add the missing line of 13 to my stranger's poem, which can below  
They went for a stunning pub lunch together before, he took the tab.

I appreciate good luck wishes for the local poetry competition @Ross_Scope

Ross_Alumni

All done @Globster