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I created it - by downloading the true lyrics and feeding them into Suno and telling it to create a new song using them but allowing significant changes and Reggae theme

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Based on a famous Beatles track and a Stevie Wonder track

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Here are the lyrics

Yo, is this the real life?

Or just a wild ride, caught in the landslide,

No escape from the grind, gotta open your eyes,

Look up to the skies, see the truth, no disguise.

I’m just a poor boy, yeah, I’m feelin’ low,

Need no sympathy, just let me flow,

Easy come, easy go, high and low,

Any way the wind blows, man, it’s all for show.

**(Chorus)**

Mama, what the f***, I just killed a dude,

Put the heat to his head, now I’m feelin’ rude,

Life was just startin’, what the hell did I do?

Threw it all away, man, I’m feelin’ blue.

Mama, ooh, didn’t mean to make you cry,

If I ain’t back tomorrow, just know I tried,

Carry on, carry on, like nothin' matters,

But this weight on my soul, man, it just shatters.

Too late, my time’s up, feel the chill in my spine,

Body achin’ all day, like I’m stuck in a bind,

Goodbye, everybody, gotta face my fate,

Leave it all behind, can’t afford to wait.

**(Chorus)**

Mama, ooh, I don’t wanna die,

Sometimes I wish that I never touched the sky,

See a silhouette, man, it’s all so grim,

Scaramouche, Scaramouche, let me dance on a whim.

Thunderbolt, lightning, yeah, it’s frightenin’ me,

Galileo, you know, set my spirit free,

I’m just a poor boy, no love in my lane,

Spare me this life, I’m tired of the pain.

**(Bridge)**

Easy come, easy go, will you let me flow?

Bismillah! Nah, we won’t let you go,

Bismillah! Gotta break the chains,

Never let me go, I’m trapped in these reins.

Mamma mia, let me flee from your cries,

Beelzebub got a devil, watch the shadows rise,

Think you can stone me? Spit in my eyes?

Love me then leave me, man, that’s just lies.

Oh baby, can’t do this, gotta break out,

Flexin’ on the haters, that’s what I’m about,

Run from the pain, I gotta get out,

Just gotta get right, no room for doubt.

**(Outro)**

Ooh, ooh, yeah, ooh, yeah,

Nothin’ really matters, you know it’s all bare,

Nothin' really matters, can’t you see?

Any way the wind blows, just set me free.

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Painful Christmas

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The Wimbles of Wombledon and it's not what any of you think