Another of my poems with drawings, hope it reads well

loony
loony Community Member Posts: 44 Empowering
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  • Rosie_Scope
    Rosie_Scope Posts: 9,442 Online Community Team

    Some lovely words @loony and a great message, thanks so much for sharing. And the picture is gorgeous too. Do you draw them from a photo or from memory?

  • loony
    loony Community Member Posts: 44 Empowering
    edited June 27

    I base my drawings around photos @Rosie_Scope

  • Rosie_Scope
    Rosie_Scope Posts: 9,442 Online Community Team

    It's lovely @loony, well done!

  • Bluebell21
    Bluebell21 Community Member Posts: 6,029 Championing

    You do some lovely poems and doing a picture brings it to life. @loony

    Well done.

  • loony
    loony Community Member Posts: 44 Empowering

    @WelshBlue im not sure I’ve written the last words to make sense, as u gave great feedback last time, can i ask your opinions,thanks

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  • Bluebell21
    Bluebell21 Community Member Posts: 6,029 Championing

    Beautiful poem @loony

  • Mary_Scope
    Mary_Scope Posts: 5,741 Scope Online Community Children and Family Specialists

    What a brilliant poem @loony, thank you for sharing😊

  • loony
    loony Community Member Posts: 44 Empowering

    thanks everyone, it’s the last two words’by embrace’ do they make sense or should it b with embrace?

  • Mary_Scope
    Mary_Scope Posts: 5,741 Scope Online Community Children and Family Specialists
    edited July 29

    I think by embrace makes sense @loony 😊

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