Poem about sadness

coylygirl
coylygirl Online Community Member Posts: 282 Empowering
in Coffee lounge
The roses are red
The violets are manky
I'm feeling sad
Please give me a hanky

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  • Ibelive2020
    Ibelive2020 Online Community Member Posts: 799 Empowering
    @coylygirl
    How many hankys do you need 1 őr 2? 
    Here táke my hand i have a full box for you ****
  • coylygirl
    coylygirl Online Community Member Posts: 282 Empowering
    Oh, bless you ****
  • Ibelive2020
    Ibelive2020 Online Community Member Posts: 799 Empowering
    @coylygirl thanks ****
  • Cher_Alumni
    Cher_Alumni Scope alumni Posts: 5,714 Championing
    edited February 2021
    Roses are red
    Violets have petals
    He said he loved me
    But preferred heavy metal

    Not sure if that works  :D

    Oh heck and if I've misjudged the tone of this thread, here's a big squishy hug for you both  <3  I hope you are both alright.  
  • coylygirl
    coylygirl Online Community Member Posts: 282 Empowering
    Love it.   I'm actually manic so don't panic.
    Can't help talking in rhyme, it happens all the time xx
  • janer1967
    janer1967 Online Community Member Posts: 21,922 Championing
    Some budding poets here I think 

    Hanky and virtual hugs on their way 
  • Cress
    Cress Online Community Member Posts: 1,005 Trailblazing
    I like a rhyme...

    There was an old man from Nantucket 
    Told he needed a jab and to book it
    Bit of a farce, it went up his @rse
    The nurse said 'whatever, you took it!'
  • Globster
    Globster Community Volunteer Host, CP Network, Scope Member Posts: 3,066 Championing
    @coylygirl
    You are really talented at writing poetry welcome and happy writing to you
  • coylygirl
    coylygirl Online Community Member Posts: 282 Empowering
    Oh thank you, I've been depresses so long that I haven't been able to write.  Now manic and the worms are just flowing!! xx
  • coylygirl
    coylygirl Online Community Member Posts: 282 Empowering
    Hi Cress, loving the limerick xx
  • Ross_Alumni
    Ross_Alumni Scope alumni Posts: 7,611 Championing
    Hello @coylygirl

    Love the poetry, but I'm sorry to hear you don't feel too good at the moment. Hopefully you have techniques in place to manage yourself through these periods but please ensure you speak with your GP if you feel as though you need further support :) 

    My name is Ross, my poetry is dross.
  • coylygirl
    coylygirl Online Community Member Posts: 282 Empowering
    Hwy Ross, you da boss!   I had a bipolar relapse after 3 years stable,  I have amazing support from the professionals and wonderful friends, family and neighbours.  Am getting there and optimistic for the future ****
  • 1119082
    1119082 Posts: 258 Contributor
    Hi there, I really like listening to pop music.
  • coylygirl
    coylygirl Online Community Member Posts: 282 Empowering
    I;m watching music TV as I can't concentrate on programmes,  I;'m enjoying it and it provides a distraction.  What sort of music do you like?
  • 1119082
    1119082 Posts: 258 Contributor
    I like listening to pop music 
  • 1119082
    1119082 Posts: 258 Contributor
    how about you 
  • coylygirl
    coylygirl Online Community Member Posts: 282 Empowering
    I like Linkin Park and Muse but bit too intense for my head at the moment so listening to strong women anthems
  • 1119082
    1119082 Posts: 258 Contributor
    okay 
  • 1119082
    1119082 Posts: 258 Contributor
    do you like poems 
  • coylygirl
    coylygirl Online Community Member Posts: 282 Empowering
    I used to write a lot of poetry @1119082, but a combination of the bipolar and  the strong meds has taken away by ability to write.  When I do, it's usually with rhyme - I experimented with free verse, but somehow I like the structure.  My mania has given me back some small skill and I hope that when my meds are sorted, I will be a little higher than I have been in the past.  :)

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