another poem for competition

Globster
Globster Community Volunteer Host, CP Network, Scope Member Posts: 2,738 Championing
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  1. A young woman Joyce

  2. She had a choice to use voice

  3. Which Joyce kept her voice moist

  4. As Joyce choice to sing and plucked the strings of her guitar

  5. Joyce had a sweet voice 

  6. As Joyce had a choice to create a youtube channel

  7. Which brought so many smiles to her subscriber's faces

  8. As Joyce chases a thousand  subscribers

  9. As Joyce made a choice to write her own songs

  10. As Joyce proved people wrong, who were putting Joyce down. 


 

 


Comments

  • Cher_Alumni
    Cher_Alumni Scope alumni Posts: 5,714 Championing
    Hello @Globster How are you doing?

    Thanks for sharing your poetry with us and good luck with the competition entry.  I like how it finishes with a powerful ending that Joyce chose to use her creativity to combat others negative words about her.  

    Have you any ideas for future poems?
  • Globster
    Globster Community Volunteer Host, CP Network, Scope Member Posts: 2,738 Championing
    @Cher_Scope
    I am fine thank you 
    I hope you are well? 
    I do have another two more I need to poems on the word choice for this particular poetry competition 
    I have no idea about future poems yet Cher but will keep the scope community updated  

  • Cher_Alumni
    Cher_Alumni Scope alumni Posts: 5,714 Championing
    Ahh good to hear you are ok.  I'm doing well thank you @Globster - growing larger every day with my bump!  Do you have anything nice planned for this weekend?

    Take your time with the other poems.  Sometimes inspiration comes to us when we least expect it :)  I look forward to hearing more.
  • Globster
    Globster Community Volunteer Host, CP Network, Scope Member Posts: 2,738 Championing

    @Cher_Scope

    I am have great weekend 

    I am glad you and the baby are well?

    I have a second poem for poetry competition and I will be writing third poem for third on the scope online community in the next few days

    A poem about a young man called Boyce

    1. A young man called Boyce 

    2. He did rejoice as Boyce get his GCSES results

    3. Which showed that Boyce a bright and clever young man

    4.    Who had a plan to be a artist 

    5. He had a choice whether to make hisline drawings complexed or easy

    6. He sees to be at easy whilst drawings

    7. As Boyce seweded seeds of confidence in his head 

    8.   As he read and kept what had read whilst doing his drawings

    9. Which had people talking

    10. As  Boyce said choice to follow his passion f

  • Globster
    Globster Community Volunteer Host, CP Network, Scope Member Posts: 2,738 Championing

    Hello Scope

    I have written my third poem for the poetry competition I appraicate hear from the scope community on what they think about the poem 

    Poem called having no choice 

    1. Some children choice about getting to go to school.

    2. For example children called Raul.

    3. As had to go to work to help his family pay for fuel

    4. As Raul would have loved to go to school

    5. But his family could not afford to send Raul to school 

    6. As Raul tried to keep cool in the hot sun

    7.  As he had no time have fun like some children have

    8. As Raul had a great smile on face

    9. Raul had aced through his work and got money which gave to his parents

    10. Who had beautiful essences come from their home temple

     


  • Tori_Scope
    Tori_Scope Scope Posts: 12,451 Championing
    I like the one about Raul in particular @Globster :) 

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