another poem
Hello Scope community
Please find another poem I have written below
I hope you are well and safe?
The Unexpected Surprise poem
I was born premature
I was at death’s door; doctors wanted to turn my life support machine off.
But my dad and mum fought to keep my life support machine on.
I fought with every breath and grew stronger each day
My family members prayed to god, who listened to their prayers
I survived and I am so alive
Which surprised the doctors
Being born prematurely has affected my legs.
I could start feeling sorry for myself, but as I said to myself, “What is the point of doing that?”
I have my brain and hands that still work
I have achieved a lot of things in my life
I still have other things I want to achieve
Nothing is going to stop me from achieving
I have a strong belief and confidence in my ability
I have felt my poetry giving me strength and enabling me to put any bad times in my life behind me
I think my poetry has given me a voice and I struggle to convey what I am sometimes failing to say through speaking
Lockdown has allowed me to concentrate on my own poetry
I like to write poetry throughout the day,
I am not letting being born premature obstruct my life
I am determined to live my life to the full
Comments
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That's a very powerful poem @Globster. Nice one.1
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This is beautiful @Globster! As someone who as also born prematurely, it's a really powerful read and could relate.
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Hello to Scope community
I am letting you know that I have sent this poem into to a poetry competition2 -
That's great @Globster! Best of luck!
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Thank you @Chloe_Scope
I appreciate you could you please help me because I created positive thoughts video about disability should not stop you from achieving your dreams
I would appreciate if you could help me share with the community1 -
A young man called Jay.
He had to show his doubters wrong
This poetry has help him to covered many subjects
I hope to my poetry is helping the Scope community
Now I feel I have given hope and belief that you can achieve anything if just mind to it.
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Lovely poetry @Globster
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A young man called Ray
He found his way to pay his bills.
As Ray found confidence in learning mathematics
Which helped Ray climb the ladder at work.
As Ray has never shirked from hard work.
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Love is a special moment
A young man called Jay
He met a young woman called Priya
As Priya helped Jay get over his fear
Jay and Priya shed a tear.
Jay and Priya held each other near.
Jay loved the young woman called Priya so much.
As Jay felt heart race at great peace as through girlfriend called Priya.
Jay hoped to share some special memories with his girlfriend.
Jay and Priya hoped to one day get married.
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Rhyming poem about my friend called EdI had phoned my friend called Ed,
Who turned out to be ill, in bed,
(with a bad head)
He said he had drunk a whole keg,
(of beer). He feared
that would lose his job, and not have bob,
to his name.
Ed was ashamed of his drinking,
and vowed to stop sinking, and thinking, about drinking
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Poem about a young women called JenA young women Jen never like to put her pencil down as she loved to sketch.
She was able to sketch out images from her imagination
Jen was about to express her feelings and emotions through her drawings
As Jen’s draws toured around the country’s art gallery and museums
Jen had won awards for her work as she didn’t worry from hard work as day and night Jen sketched1 -
My Summer poem
The beautiful sun was shining and cool breeze blow by drawing back the white fluffy clouds to show a clear blue sky. As the birds were tweeting melodiously singing. I feel like writing more poetry when the sun is out. I drink a cold glass of lemonade with ice in the house because the seat electric wheelchair gets too hot in the sun outside. As dad and mum love pottering around in the garden. As they both love planting beautiful different coloured flowers in the garden
I would appreciate the community think about the new poem
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Weather poemI don’t not like winter as it makes my legs tight as the cold winter bites with a great might
As wear clothing to keep me warm during the winter months made me feel depressed and I didn’t not feel like do anything with my life
The dark nights causes me fright
The shine light from heart buns so brightI know I can fall for from a great height if I become complacent while I am writing poetry writing0 -
Really great @Globster!
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