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A new poem

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  • Globster
    Globster Community member, Community Volunteer Host, CP Network, Scope Member Posts: 2,385 Disability Gamechanger
    edited February 2021
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    My poem about you did this 

    1. A young man called  Reece was on lease from the police

    2. Reece was reminded to keep the peace by Aleece

    3. Aleece knew that he had a bad temper.

    4. Aleece knew that he could fly handle at any time

    5. Reece gave Aleece so much verbal abuse each day.

    6. Aleece what Reece said and did not answer back to him

    7. Aleece knew her life looked bleak with Reece.

    8. Alecee rang the police who waited for Reece 

    9. Reece was led away by the police, Aleece tells Reece you did this

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  • Globster
    Globster Community member, Community Volunteer Host, CP Network, Scope Member Posts: 2,385 Disability Gamechanger
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     my going under prompt poem



    1.  A young woman called Chunda  

    2. She loved to snorkelling underwater in the sea

    3. Chunda felt free

    4. She was able to see three beautiful blues, reds and orange fishes 

    5. Chunda  has wished on the day should a white water shark 

    6.  This sparked her to take photos of the different fishes she saw

    7. She named her collection of photographs  of fishes going under  

    8. Chunda was left to wonder she would ever see a white water shark 

    9. Chunda had a great passion for snorkelling and taking photographs

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  • 1119082
    1119082 Posts: 258 Courageous
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    Doing something you really enjoy can be extremely fun.
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  • Globster
    Globster Community member, Community Volunteer Host, CP Network, Scope Member Posts: 2,385 Disability Gamechanger
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    Hello to the Scope community 

    I have written a poem for Cerebral Palsy Awareness Month. I would appreciate getting your advice on whether you reckon I need to change aspects of the poem   

     CP Awareness poem

    We have had to learn to become fighters.

    We can not let our conditions define us. 

    We  have a special gift of inner strength to prove our doubts wrong

     Who for long people thought we were  weak and that we had futures were bleak

          I  feel we are very unique in our own little way.

        As we are able to  ink our arms  together  to fight for change 

             We have hidden talents with us, we need to take the time home our talents 

            We can succeed in what we want to do in our lives.  

               As we strive, knock the barriers that have been placed on us.

                      We are thankful to our parents for giving us life

               We can use our talents to hopefully change people's perspectives. People with Cerebral Palsy are very creative people. We fill our lives with happiness by achieving our goals we set ourselves each day. 

                   


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  • Richard_Scope
    Richard_Scope Posts: 3,660 Scope online community team
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    One of your best @Globster
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  • Globster
    Globster Community member, Community Volunteer Host, CP Network, Scope Member Posts: 2,385 Disability Gamechanger
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    @Richard_Scope
    Thank you, Richard, I appreciate your kind work
    Richard how to go about post poem on Twitter because done it before

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  • Adrian_Scope
    Adrian_Scope Posts: 11,065 Scope online community team
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    I agree with Richard, I think this is one of your best poems so far. I particularly like the flow in the first few lines, it's a great opening and draws you in and makes you want to read more.

    I really don't think you need to change anything. You could look for a synonym for 'talents' so it isn't said twice in the same line but it's not necessarily as it works well even with it.

    Really great work @Globster. Will you be sharing it anywhere else? 
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  • Globster
    Globster Community member, Community Volunteer Host, CP Network, Scope Member Posts: 2,385 Disability Gamechanger
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    @Adrian_Scope
    I think Jennifer from Cp was going publish the poem on CP social media platform
    I was going share to share the poem on Scope Twitter page under the hashtag CP Awareness  Adrian 
    I am not how put my poem on social media to that Adrian if some help to do this in March with the month of CP awareness month

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  • Globster
    Globster Community member, Community Volunteer Host, CP Network, Scope Member Posts: 2,385 Disability Gamechanger
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    I have correct my grammar and  punctuation in my poem 

     CP Awareness poem

    We have had to learn to become fighters.

    We can not let our conditions define us. 

    We  have special gifts of inner strength to prove our doubts wrong

    For long, people thought we were  weak and that out futures were bleak

    I  feel we are unique in our own way.

    We are able to link our arms  together  to fight for change 

    We have hidden talents within us, we need to take the time honing our talents 

    We can succeed in what we want to do.  

    We stride, knock down the barriers that have been placed before us.

    We are thankful to our parents for giving us life

    We can use our talents to hopefully change people's perspectives. People with Cerebral Palsy are very creative people. We fill our lives with happiness by achieving the goals we set ourselves each day. 

                   



                                                                  

                                 


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  • Globster
    Globster Community member, Community Volunteer Host, CP Network, Scope Member Posts: 2,385 Disability Gamechanger
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    my prompt poem about young man Coffey bad cup of Coffee

    1. A young man called Coffey

    2. He had a bad cup of coffee 

    3. Coffey started to cough as coffee the tasted off

    4. He scoffed a few chocolates to rid the bad taste 

    5. Coffey faced a race to braced for long day work

    6. The bad cup Coffey had start morning

    7. Which left him yawning

    8. He was snoring on Microsoft teams meeting with the boss

    9. Coffey was to get reports boss waiting for the reports 

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  • 1119082
    1119082 Posts: 258 Courageous
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    These poem are all very rhyming 
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  • 1119082
    1119082 Posts: 258 Courageous
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    well done keep  up with all of the good work 
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  • Globster
    Globster Community member, Community Volunteer Host, CP Network, Scope Member Posts: 2,385 Disability Gamechanger
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    My prompt poem about Black and Gold

    1. A young woman called Jolene

    2. She was a young fashion designer.

    3. Joelene had produced a black and gold dress

    4.  She entered into a young fashion designer contest

    5. Joelene wanted to test whether was the fashion designer

    6. She was given feedback by the judges

    7.  Jolen was asked to make a minor adjustment

    8. The judges decided Joelene was the winner

    9. She was left shocked that she won a dress designer contest





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  • coylygirl
    coylygirl Community member Posts: 283 Pioneering
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    What a talent you have  :)
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  • Globster
    Globster Community member, Community Volunteer Host, CP Network, Scope Member Posts: 2,385 Disability Gamechanger
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    @coylygirl

    I appreciate your kind words Coylygirl, I hope you and your family are well and safe?    

    prompt  poem about Such Big Plans’

    •  A young man called Kim 

    • She had big plans get slim

    • Kim got slim and trim think by going running every morning

    • She goes running even in the pouring

    • As Kim’s running keep her sane for difficult lockdown

    • Which dawned on her that is time I get into shape

    • Every morning  she had to scrape the mud off her running shoes

    • Kim  saw some views of the Yorkshire Moors on her morning runs 

    •  Kim has big plans to lose tons of weight by running. 


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  • Cher_Alumni
    Cher_Alumni Scope alumni Posts: 5,741 Disability Gamechanger
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    @Globster You've written some amazing poems lately, the one for CP awareness is very powerful  <3
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  • Globster
    Globster Community member, Community Volunteer Host, CP Network, Scope Member Posts: 2,385 Disability Gamechanger
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    @Cher_Scope
    I would appreciate your help with posting my CP awareness poem on Twiter for me in the month of March. I  not very confident at posting Twitter but  I would like to post on Twitter because my poem could spread awareness of cerebral palsy to a large audiences 

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  • Globster
    Globster Community member, Community Volunteer Host, CP Network, Scope Member Posts: 2,385 Disability Gamechanger
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     My prompt poem about Gentle mind  

    1. A young woman called Gemma 

    2. Who had a gentle mind

    3. She lined her mind by doing some reading

    4. Gem liked to stream her favourite television show

    5. Gem raised every  morning

    6. She kept her gentle mind busy by writing poetry

    7. She wrote a poem about an oak tree

    8. As Gemma her gentle mind free 

    9. Gemma was scared of bees 

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  • Globster
    Globster Community member, Community Volunteer Host, CP Network, Scope Member Posts: 2,385 Disability Gamechanger
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    My prompt poem about dancing rain 


    1. A young woman called Jane

    2. She liked dancing in the rain

    3. Jane had a sprained  her foot

    4.  This did stop Jane from dancing in the rain.

    5. Jane gained positive chain thought by dancing in the rain

    6. Jane’s videos of her dancing in rained online traction

    7. So many people were reacting about dancing in the rain videos

    8.  Which help Jane rise to fame by dancing in the rain videos

    9. Jane turned her hobby of dancing into her career.




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  • Ross_Alumni
    Ross_Alumni Scope alumni Posts: 7,652 Disability Gamechanger
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    Lovely poems @Globster

    Thank you
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