A new poem

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  • Globster
    Globster Community Volunteer Host, CP Network, Scope Member Posts: 3,066 Championing
    Poem about a young man called Jed
    A young Jed led a dangerous life 
    As was a lot of stiff 
    As life was going down the wrong path 
    Jed then sanctuary in his rapping lyrics writing of his own songs  
    As Jed had rapped about some difficult times he had faced in his life 
     
  • Globster
    Globster Community Volunteer Host, CP Network, Scope Member Posts: 3,066 Championing
    A poem young woman called Stacey 
    A young woman called Stacey looked pasty as she spent too long in the sun
    Stacey did not ever go back outside when the sun was out
    As Stacey laid on the sofa 
    Stacey at one important message for people not to stay sunshine for too long 
  • Cher_Alumni
    Cher_Alumni Scope alumni Posts: 5,714 Championing
    @Globster You've been busy :)  Good work!  Do you have any ideas for poems to write this week?
  • Globster
    Globster Community Volunteer Host, CP Network, Scope Member Posts: 3,066 Championing
    @Cher_Scope
    I do have a few ideas but I will keeping them a surprise 

  • 66Mustang
    66Mustang Online Community Member Posts: 15,063 Championing
    I’m looking forward to it @Globster
  • Globster
    Globster Community Volunteer Host, CP Network, Scope Member Posts: 3,066 Championing
    A poem about young women called Shaid 
    A young women called Shaid love to rave 
    She was brave to dance in her high heels 
    But due to the lockdown Shaid was missing her raving 
  • Globster
    Globster Community Volunteer Host, CP Network, Scope Member Posts: 3,066 Championing
    edited November 2020
    A poem about young women May
    A young women called Meg had a bad leg 
    That did not stop Meg from getting out of bed
    Meg stayed positive 
  • Globster
    Globster Community Volunteer Host, CP Network, Scope Member Posts: 3,066 Championing
    A poem young man called Jed dreaded going to the dentist 
    but Jed tooth was hurting 
    And Jed was scared of needles 
    But Jed was in great pain so he had to go to the dentist 
  • Ross_Alumni
    Ross_Alumni Scope alumni Posts: 7,611 Championing
    I can empathise with Jed @Globster, I don't like needles either.
  • Globster
    Globster Community Volunteer Host, CP Network, Scope Member Posts: 3,066 Championing
    @Ross_Scope
    I don't I like needles myself I had my botox injection my backlephen pump filled every six months 
  • Ross_Alumni
    Ross_Alumni Scope alumni Posts: 7,611 Championing
    Well you are very brave for going through that @Globster :) 
  • Globster
    Globster Community Volunteer Host, CP Network, Scope Member Posts: 3,066 Championing
    A poem about young called Fred
    A young man called Fred 
    He had a dread taking a new medication for diabetes
    This was because was not sure what medication was going to affect his body
     

  • Ross_Alumni
    Ross_Alumni Scope alumni Posts: 7,611 Championing
    Thanks for sharing again @Globster :) 
  • Globster
    Globster Community Volunteer Host, CP Network, Scope Member Posts: 3,066 Championing
     A poem about young woman called Kay
    A young woman called Kay found her way to pay her bills 
    As Kay made homemade biscuits. 
    As the beautiful smell of chocolate chip cookies 
    As she was able to purchase a shop where she made her chocolate chip cookies
    As her business was slow for the first few months but then her business took off when she advising her business 
  • Tori_Scope
    Tori_Scope Scope Posts: 12,468 Championing
    I'd love some of Kay's biscuits right now @Globster
  • Globster
    Globster Community Volunteer Host, CP Network, Scope Member Posts: 3,066 Championing
    A poem about a man called Jay
    A young man Jay prayed that stayed safe during to Covid 19 
    Jay get praises for his poetry has brought a smile to people faces
    As he hopes to lift people for knees and please them through his poetry writing 
     
  • Ross_Alumni
    Ross_Alumni Scope alumni Posts: 7,611 Championing
    I bet Jay has marvellous poetry skills :) 
  • Globster
    Globster Community Volunteer Host, CP Network, Scope Member Posts: 3,066 Championing
    edited November 2020
    @Tori_Scope
    I got mock test results I didn’t quite get the pass mark for the mock exam because I got 11 out of 20 I know where I went wrong and I am upbeat that I will achieve the exam mark next time and teacher has suggested that I join some extra online classes they are GCSE English 
  • 66Mustang
    66Mustang Online Community Member Posts: 15,063 Championing
    I think 11 out of 20 is still a respectable score and would be happy with that so well done  :)

    As long as you know where you need to improve that’s what matters, that is the whole point of mock tests :)
  • Globster
    Globster Community Volunteer Host, CP Network, Scope Member Posts: 3,066 Championing
    @66Mustang
    I am well happy with my marks  :) I know that where I need to improve now and will definitely give a better preparation for the real exam 
    Thank you for the amazing support of the scope  online community